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Reviewing Helen Swordâs The Writerâs Diet has probably been one of my biggest challenges.
Not merely because Iâm simultaneously comparing my own writing (and nervously wondering if itâs in a permanent coma after numerous linguistic heart attacks) but because Iâm engaging in a meta-reading exercise of Swordâs own work.
Itâs a great title. Even if youâve never gone on a diet itâs not hard to imagine the dos and donâts: cut down the calories and let your taste buds appreciate the heavenly concoctions of smoked salmon, dark chocolate and blueberries â or at least their grammatical equivalents. Swordâs secret is that she uses her extended metaphor throughout this handy little text without walloping you on the head with too many facts and figures.
The book is directed not just at academics (many of whom need a completely new writerly regime anyhow) but poets, fiction writers, journalists, advertorial writers and even real estate agents; especially as most writers will have inevitably dabbled across more than a few genres.
Packed with constructive recommendations to up oneâs âverbal verveâ lose the âad-dictionsâ and downsize the âprepositional podgeâ itâs an entertaining schedule that addresses some of the problem areas of our writing today. Techniques to develop high ânoun densityâ and curtail âwaste wordsâ are also included and each chapter is accompanied with numerous examples and exercises.
Swordâs writing is sharp and cheerful and although wading through any form of regiment isnât particularly attractive she does manage to keep a sense of humour throughout the text. For example she recommends limiting the use of prepositional phrases but not complete abandonment explaining, âTry writing a preposition-free sentence, like the one you are reading right now, and you will feel handcuffed, shacked, frustrated.â Her visual imagery is accompanied by a knack of reflexive contemplation â before you can point out that Sword might be a guilty of trespassing her own commandments sheâs already pointed out that sheâs done her homework.
There will be parts of this manual that will be more useful than others (depending on your own writing) and itâs worth knowing that if you do take the writerâs diet online test (up to a 1000 words) you might get a result that could vary between âfit and trimâ to âheart attack areaâ. Equally, an article on how baby stingrays appears as stuffed ravioli might have a very different result to a reflective poem on Lionâs Rock out at Piha. Itâs a computer generated result not a person so beware and use the results in the most productive manner befitting your text and style.
Handy, easily accessible and although not furnished with the finer details (who needs syntax or morphology anyway) it is a useful manual to remind oneself that diets these days stretch well beyond whatâs good for our waistline.
REVIEWER: Dione Joseph
TITLE: The Writerâs Diet
AUTHOR(S): Helen Sword
PUBLISHER: Auckland University Press
RRP: $24.99